appreciable

Tue, 05/03/2016 - 21:28 -- clshdzE

you never know what you have until its gone. 

now trust me, wait no.. believe me when I say this I

I dont want t, no... I dont need you to choose a path like me 

im sorry, i found out I say sorry too much in my poem 

I dont know to who or to what, to where I just think 

saying sorry are for those who are scared ...

no, wait those are not worth it yet 

yes I choose to be like this I messed up, you got fed up like 

the feds who always mess up.

I failed ...I..no..wait...I didnt even try

I got so caught up in own needs I forgot how to give thinking I'll recieve something 

in return 

yes i got  upper cut to my head the vibration was felt all over my body 

thats what is called paralyzation, I cant move, I'm stiff as these words put in place

I lost you, i dont know, I think i did 

now i have a album about you 

I have a poem about you 

I still have the poem you wrote about me 

it was the first time somebody ever wrote to me, besides colleges, governments, bills

24 hours no.. wait .. 72 hours gone by , I guess thats what its called forzen in time

I was stupid, ignoranent

to put this on you, maybe I can cherish those in my life now

I was a fool too much, I spoke to soon

I guess that why the panthers lost too

I'm telling you, you told me back

whiplash the end of our time, i cursed the love you had, I shredded the words

you gave...and now.. it feels like a river is coming home !

an ocean getting ready to be explored!

a creek wating to be dug up!

a lake thinking about the next summer!

a stream needing to be more powerful!

a waterfall, it doesnt care if it falls it just wants to let everything out!

a pond.. locked upon the eyes as a mirror just a reflection from life

reminding people they are still alive!

you dont derserve this, no.. wait.. I derserve this

I'm a idiot, a kid, who doesnt know what to say when told

the biggest misconception of his knowlegde; YOU DONT UNDERSTAND

But I felt pain, agony I just suck at putting into words

 I still love you ! I still do..

no?!.. yes!?... nooo!...yeeess....wait

please.....wait 

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