The Beachness of Life

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Life's a beach, the bugs die


Little ones fall, moma cry


Life's a beach, the water dirty


Bullies, messin around with nerdies


Life's a beach, the sand is flat


You step on a crack and break a back


Life's a beach, the sun is too hot


The amount of sun-screen needed is a lot


Life's a beach, you go to the creek


You step on a piece of beach with your feet


After a creep by the creek,


Same old, same old, life's a beach.


If beach is a life, make it right


Make it wrong, and you'll get left.


In the sand making castes,


H2O will have it swept.


In the depth of getting dealt with,


Lifeguards all around who can help it,


Only you felt it, getting your wealth in


Life is a beach with objects all selfless...

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