Can You See Me

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I've been down this path before 
 
Seeing all familiar faces.
 
So many thoughts that I have had
 
Never met these dreadful places.
 
It's times like these that I wonder
 
Would it still be the same.
 
If nothing ever happened
 
Would they still know your name.
 
If I could have one more second
 
To tell you how I feel.
 
I would take that for granted
 
Not as a second to steal.
 
Can you see me
 
Calling for your praise.
 
As my years flow down
 
I give to you these hands I raise.
 
Take my hand 
 
To know it's true.
 
Can you see me
 
Because I can see you.
 
 
 
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