The Cave

A cave sits in front of your door,

You pass by it every day, not knowing

Refusing to know

Too busy to know

The cave is empty,

Air sweeps through

No dust to swirl around

Just empty,

Right outside your door

And you don’t even know

Comments

S611526Jessica

I really like this! I wish I was that good...I love writing but it's hard sometimes.

Polkaspottedsweater

Wow! Thank you so much! And I have a hard time sometimes, too. It comes with the passion I guess xP

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