Chlorine

Cold

An Icy Mold

Which Encapsulated My Tired Soul

Surprise, Burning Eyes

Light

Shivers Rock My Skin

My Heart Takes Flight

Heat

A Rhythmic Beat

I'm An Aquatic Beast

Excitement, An Incitement

Adrenaline Assaults My Veins

My Lungs Demand Aquatic Ascent

 

This poem is about: 
Me
Poetry Terms Demonstrated: 
Allusion

Comments

lhb5

7 years ago

Wow. From the first word you wrote, I've been captured by your words. You can describe the simplest things in life with so much detail. The rhyme in your poem was impressive. I really look forward to reading your next poem!

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