Coma

The world around me
Isn't real
I'm in an abyss
A place where time
Is stagnant
I hear voices
Surround me
But I can't speak
Nor can I open my eyes
I wish to wake up
And leave this darkness
But I'm stuck
Until the monitor
Beeps loudly

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

upnorthdavid

Great, great. Make the mind wonder and wander, make me re-read to find deeper meaning

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