Concrete Walls

Location

72120
United States
34° 55' 7.8024" N, 92° 15' 11.4948" W

Hidden cries behind sweet, innocent eyes
Faint whimpers of mistaken trust
Confusion from the hand that is held
A future dried up in the dust

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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