Dear Old Friend, Thanks For Everything

Dear Old Friend,

 

I want to let you know how much you hurt me.

Everytime I talked to you, it was a silent plea.

But you ignored it, and carried on,

Not even noticing that I was fading, almost gone.

 

Your words cut me deeper than any knife,

Having a huge impact on my life.

You knew how much I needed you,

But you just left me one day, out of the blue.

 

I was so close to ending it all.

Just one cut, and I'd finally fall.

I told you this, and you turned your head,

Not even caring, that I might actually end up dead.

 

The night that I was so close,

Another friend messaged me, and I froze.

He told me that everything would be okay,

And I didn't have to go out this way.

 

That friend unclouded my mind,

Because before when I looked at the world, I was blind.

But all this happened, no thanks to you,

So I hope your happy, with what you put me through.

 

Sincerely, Cassidy, your old friend

P.S. I hope you know, that this is the end

 

 

 

 

 

 

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