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Death's Whisper

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I find it funny
My dear
How you say that you love me
I think it scary
My dear
How you think you know me

I find you fake
My dear
Look how smile in my face
What will you do
my dear
After I’ve had all I can take

I think it strange
My dear
Y’all make me so unhappy
I find it lonesome
My dear
How no one understands me

“It’s coming slowly
My dear
The awaiting pain
To be laid lowly
My dear
My family haunts me
My dear
Come closer
My dear
Lean farther
My dear
Reach deeper
My dear
Feel worse
My dear
Keep crying
My dear
Feel fear
My dear
Again come closer
My dear”
Death whispers in my ear

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Submitted by LadeeDee on

I was going through a rough patch in my life and this was my only outlet.
I transformed all of the negative feelings that I had into this poem.

If you can relate then good, but if not I would really like it if no one
left any rude remarks or anything on here.
Thank you!