equality and power

Sun, 03/31/2013 - 12:28 -- Marqi

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United States
42° 16' 57.3708" N, 71° 4' 3.378" W

strongest of them all
Hear me cry for civil rights
knowledge is power

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Marqi

this piece is difficult because of the restrictions a haiku can have but these restriction allow us to dive deep and let my true self come out quickly

Eunoia

strongest of them all (who? you?
for civil rights-- thiis part doesn't work very well, hoever your haiku is for civil rights
ery strong, maybe turn into you ownr type of poem in delete the civil rights bit. I know what you can put there so I know there are bit wording out there, it just takes a little search/
nice job though:0

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