Everlasting love

I close my eyes and my demons come
Opening them I see stone walls and a hall way leading foward
I try to walk but cant 
I look down, am in chains that  linke my feet and hands
The chains have words on them
Hate, Greed, Lust, Anger, Lying every sin I have done was on those chains
A whip cracked like fire works and I start walking
Looking up I see others in front of me dazed and just walking too
Others with a face of fear so great they where almost ghost
CRACK!! The whip strikes and the walk becomes a jog
CRACK!! That jog turns to a run
We are all running 
Screams of terror, horror, and agony come
Then I see it
HELL FIRE
Looking around terrified trying to find help
Sweat dripping down my terror stricken face
CRACK!!
Now everything is a blur and I feel the flames of HELL FIRE 
The Screams are defining now, am so close
I find the will power to fall to my knees and cry out
Crying out for help, for a saving hand
CRACK!! the whip licks my back
I cry for help louder and louder till my throat is sand paper
Then SNAP! my chains were broken 
Tears coming out of my eyes like a water fall
I look up and see my Savior 
I grab his hand so soft like velvet sheets
He pulls me away from all the havoc
He saved me with his unconditional love of forgivness
 

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