Fall Deep!!!

Thu, 07/20/2017 - 13:18 -- ZRJ

I don't sleep to dream

I dream to awake

but the dream I keep

is the dream you take 

and what I seek is a vision 

that you seem to create 

cuz your love is my prison 

that I can not escape 

i have all these desions 

that I can never make

so give me an honest opinion 

was our love just a mistake 

cuz I'm stuck in this position 

that I absolutely hate

and I'm still wishen 

that this was just fiction 

but I know pretending is fake

i guess it was just a powerful conviction 

because our destiny became our fate

but it's better to love and loss

for a cause and for a sake

with times to be tall

and times to fall

Than to never have loved at all... 

You!!!

 

 

 

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