Five Buck Wine

Just keep my mind inside my head

We’ll be us both inside my bed

I’ve got to keep my life instead

Of staying in my lonely head

 

We’ll be us both inside my bed

But I’ll accept the real risk of

Just staying in my lonely head

For one last final only night

 

And I’ll accept the real risk of

Just drinking five buck liquor, damn

For one last final only night

We won’t have to fight again, now

 

Just drinking five buck liquor, damn

Just keep my mind inside my head

We won’t have to fight again, now

Just keep my mind inside my head

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