Flawless? In Who's Eyes?

In HIS eyes you are PERFECT

You're BEAUTIFUL

You're more than ENOUGH

Who?

Your life is far more important

So much...

He did what no other will ever do

Beaten!, Betrayed!, Slammed!,

Crushed from the inside and out

Torn with hatered and ripped flesh

HE remained on that tree....

What greater pain in the world could there be besides this?

Do you beleive me now?

I don't know of any other kings that have done this

It's been years since than, 

The love shown that day still remains faithful

I have seen and met the greatest love of all

How could I not be flawless!

Without knowing who I am or what I am 

Without knowing if I would respond back to the love or not

He still took that death that was ment for me

I don't know about anyone else..but...if I'm ever asked if I'm flawless

The answer would be found in the greatest love story ever been told

Of coarse I am! 

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