Flying to Close to the Sun

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The Sun, So high in the sky, but never too close to melt my wings, but far enough to shine light upon the future ahead of me.

I am flawless in all aspects due to me being me, doing all I can to complete the job at hand. Helping all who need help, never quitting, never failing, never flying to close to the sun.

Mothers, fathers, sisters, brothers, friends, family, anyone willing to accompany me on my flight, are loved and respected in my heart, never to be forgotten, never to be lost in the vast sea below. Always to be praised for flying behind me, never to close to the sun.

I am flawless for having people around, who support all my decisions.

I am flawless becuase I fly with my family, not myself, never to close to the sun.

 

 

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