"Her"

Fri, 12/22/2017 - 14:49 -- Khalls1

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Florida
United States

I was always told you can't buy into the fantasy

So I decided to just rent it for a while

Because my mind was a mental canvas

And her beauty was the inspiration painting a vivid mental picture of the future we could have together

But she never saw herself that way

She was never told that she was worth the world

That everyday without her in my life feels empty

That when I am with her everything feels right

She feels like the weight of the world is on her shoulders

But it was that pressure that turned her from the coal she thought she was

To the diamond she is today

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