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You said it all

And I just listened

But I feel as if I just took a fall

You said how you loved how my eyes glistened

You told me all it took was our first time

It was the very night you said you loved me

But now you saying that night wasn't worth a dime

After that your were just waiting for a time to get up and flea

You left me with one thing

We commited the ulimate sin

And we did this all even with giving me a ring

How could you do this , thought you were here to the end

I'm keeping this baby

I just in complete shock

You are a total cock

Could you please stay, maybe?

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