My Community Change

Within My Community They Place Value On Looking Like Young, Rich, Negras, They Place Value On "Jobs" But Overlook The Grind For A "Career" That Could Leave You With Five Figures, I Would Change They Opinions, Hoping Maybe I Could Sway They Decisions, For If I Complete This Special Mission, Maybe Their Eyes Could Open Up To A LIFE THAT'S WORTH LIVEN, But.... Overall I Feel its the priority of money usage I would change, i wish I could change they vision hoping they could see pass their normal range, is it really about the impressions of others that causes my community to spend money they don't have, buy clothes, buy shoes, algebraic expressions within a mall but they fail to pass simple math, Within my community its so much more to life than money and people's achknowledgement, God bless me with these words and make a change for my environment...... 

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