My Disease

Dear father

dear brother

there's somthing wrong 

 

It's not fair 

I need care

I'm just not strong 

 

Dear father

dear brother

I don't have long

 

It happened there

over there

just under the stair 

 

She's still there 

with the long

brown hair

 

It's not fair! 

I need care! 

 

Dear father 

dear brother 

tell mom "be strong" 

 

I have cooties

I assure you

I don't have long. 

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