in my room ( what i found )

When I woke up this morning

I asked myself "What is life about?"

I found the answer in my room.

..the fan said "Be cool."

The roof said "Aim high."

The window said "See the world!"

The clock said "Every minute is precious."

The mirror said "Reflect before you act."

The calendar said "Be up to date."

The door said "Push hard for your goals."

The floor said "Kneel down and pray"

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KingdomDreamer

AMEN!  Whoa seriously this is fire.  Like WOW!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i wrote that 5 yrs ago and i happen to see that and i said let me add that poem to my legacy  as a poet

it's simplistically powerful when people understand the menaing of it

check out my other poems

thanks for all the luv and support

MARs

This is so inspirational. Truely, kneel down and pray. Also, it reminds

me of The Farmer And The Queen by Shel Silverstein.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

I'm humble that you were inspired
This is all for The Lord
Continue to read my work
Come & join my group

MARs

I was wondering, what's the name of your 

group? So I can look for it in the list of groups.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

My group is call Mvp-most valuable poets
Join my group and inspire people

MARs

Thanks, I'm currently thinking about if I want to join a group or not.

 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Give yourself the opportunity to join my group and promote your work

GinaaMariee

Wonderful

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you regina

thank you for the support

check out my other poems

come join my group mvp-most valuable poets

1SP

Thanks for being a good mentor and for guiding me on the right path. I will always be thankful to you.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

The Lord puts people in our lives for a reason
Thank you for the opportunity brother of reading my work
Thank you for the opportunity of promoting your work
I want you to chase greatness

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