Once Upon An Adventure

Once upon an adventure I dream of the stars 

I contimplate saturn, jupiter, mars

Work and I work slaving all day, just for a boy to take it one day

Peter pan thats what they call me he said with a smile

while practically feeding me to a hungry crocodile

but he always seems to be the hero if the book

they all turn a blind eye to "evil captain hook"

But I earn my living with honest pay

or by cleverly planning as pirates would say

so Ill work and work on sea or on land

to catch those lost boys and sly peter pan

Comments

pkablan

I loved that, it took a couple reads to realize whos shoes you had filled. I guess its always common to fill the hero's shoes but not in this case. nice!

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