Out It Goes

Sat, 03/30/2013 - 23:55 -- iwojima

And marching-
in this sea of dreams
as the sight folds over-

The pressure burns
our skin blue
with red peeling underneath

A step
each time stronger.
The number will not dim.

We march-
In this sea of dreams
To dreams we see.

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