Out On The Open Water

Cleat hitch release me

Bowline do not slow me down

Set the boom at 23

Hand on rudder bye to cape town

The wind will show the way

Sea spray on my face

I am starting a very good day

A transformation will take place

Being free on the ocean brings me up

Feeling down will soon disppear

Nature knows when we need a pickup

I wish everyone could be here

 

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