paragon

Wed, 10/23/2013 - 16:20 -- tachile

LOUD

silent

dispersed

 the clouds that rain shattered blood through you

distilled inside of you frozen

your disires for what you yearn

the doubt that always stops you

your second mind thats always with you

the paragon you want to be

the nothing that you think you are

Hollowed

Broken

VAins

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