Please See ME

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I just want to know you care,
That you are proud,
That I can do something right,
Anything right.

I need you by my side,
I'm so much like you,
The flaws you see in me,
Are the ones I see 100x in myself.

There is no way for me to be happy,
Unless I know,
That you think I have done good,
I have succeeded.

I strive for your approval,
But always fall short,
This seems to be the only way,
The only way you understand.

I need you to know,
I love you, You are my everything,
But if I can't let you know what I think,
Than I don't know how we can stay.

Stay in this time,
Where your my idol,
And I'm your girl,
Let me be her again.

Let me be the one,
The one you wake up to see,
The one you'll never leave,
The one you're proud of.

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