Rain

Surprised at the sight i lay.................. 
Confused at the words i ignore........... 
Time can't wait and neither should i 
I gave my all and you let it fly 
As a heart beat you live your life 
You lost your place in my life 
If i could take it back i would 
But that would just make it worse........ 
That the word love can be expressed in the wrong ways 
And the feeling of compasion can be used as if it were a lion shaved for its fur 
I cry no tears i feel no pain 
But noone can survive in the heavy RAIN...

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