Raindrops on Roses or is it Tears

Father's gone Knock Knock I can't answer without Father. Knock Knock Please leave Silence A Rose A Vase A Note Knock Knock No! I'm too ugly Knock Knock No! He's inside. I'll hide. 8 petals remain Knock Knock Who's she? Knock Knock A beauty 6 petals remain Knock Knock She's here. He's gone Knock Knock She'll know I'm ugly 4 petals remain Knock Knock Dinner Knock Knock Come out, Please 2 petals remain Kindess. It's been some time. Reading, Dancing, Playing Her and me forever. She'll stay I know it. One petal remains She's gone Bang Bang I'm scared Bang Bang Help! NO PETALS REMAIN DEATH

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