So Surreal

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43016
United States
40° 4' 34.1256" N, 83° 9' 15.048" W

So surreal a beauty
That a love could even possess
I'm captivated by the simple things
You do
You're lovely
Wonderful
Simply amazing
A star couldn't give as much
Love as you do honey
You taste so sweet
Like a summer air
I'm brought back to the
Golden days
An innocent love
Could get away with anything
Marry me today
Say forever more
I could hold on
For just a bit longer

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