Sunset Night

Location

 

 

 

When you leave

you venture above

dormant pavement

This is a memory

This is a moment

You feel all the night’s breeze

just the right fleece

warm and worn

Towering pines

outlook houses preserved

in street light glaze

Zooming in

A crowded caterpillar crawls

to the ocean’s shh  

to the firepit’s crackle

Content smokey eyes

a constellation’s

glinting grin

The wind stirs you

into that calm tired

You plug in the music

that sweeps you home

  

Poetry Terms Demonstrated: 

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741