The Take over

Thu, 06/13/2013 - 13:21 -- doutlaw

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10031
United States
40° 49' 37.2756" N, 73° 57' 2.4372" W

With every spark of electricity I feel the energy of my past claw to my future
Gasping for air
As it resurfaces with a vengeance from being locked down, forced in a cold iron box with no oxygen as I left you 2 die
But you where strong so you waited until the day I needed you
With your insidious words I thought we could integrate like 2 halfs of a whole
But instead you yearned to shine
consume my thoughts, body and soul
until it was just you
until I was just an after image in our personality
you fought, you climbed, determined to win
but in the end I was victorious, superior
locked in that cold iron box is where you shall stay

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