What Makes the World go 'Round- Gabriella Tolstova

I love my family, don't get me wrong

But I'm sure there are other feelings

That makes my smile go bong!

Don't get me started on sparkly rings.

I love snowflakes and puppies and love,

Yes! I love love, which in a way is weird

But this love can be turned towards chocolate doves.

So I realized what makes me feel good is smeared

Ice-cream, spring, and funny cat videos.

These are a few of my favorite things.

And the endless hours looking for clothes

But it would be even better if I had wings.

In the end, I realized that I can just settle with my family,

Since they are the ones that I can always be free.

 

 

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
My country
Our world
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gabriellatolstova

I love it, so inspirational!!!!!!!

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