Where did the time go

Okay fair warning, this poem sucks. But I'm egar to hear how i should improve. here it goes!

Now is the youth of discovery

Now is the ag eof knowlege

2 fools together make a man worth time

time is gone, time will fly

Around the clock your life runs

around the wallet your life revolves

up and down through life situations

How hard? That's a mindset

How hard? That's thinking

10 to 20 to 42

50,80, times up for you

Everybody knows, everyone goes

Where was i when they needed me most

everyone cries in order to fly

fly to a place in the endless sky

Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of happiness

no longer matteres until my children live in it

Live in a world that I created

That I destroyed, that I ignited

a world they will suffer

maybe worsen maybe fight in

I still have time, an active mind

let it soar, let my spirit chime

This poem is about: 
Me
My country
Our world

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