Your Angel

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assesment 

assignment 

we're both out of alignment 

because power can be blinding 

in this untouchable finding 

potentially binding 

this silver lineing 

that sends you flying 

and it's all in timing 

couldn't explain without rhyming 

with that glow, man she's shining 

cause she's your star 

ran away with your heart 

but she's in your arms 

and your mind 

all the time 

she IS time 

every moment spent away from her is wasted 

let's face it 

you were breaking 

smiles faking 

you were shaking 

the heart inside was aching 

until you saw her 

she was breathtaking 

there was no mistaking 

that something inside was waking 

you fell in love 

but not with her hair,

her eyes,

her smile 

that came after.

you feel in love with her care,

her mind,

her guile. 

her mind 

you find, 

you could watch her for the rest of your life,

like watching an angel fly. 

she was your angel 

and so you fly. 

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