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Between two heartbeats..

October 3, 2026

The Time where one beat, the Soul one life splits The Time where Pain turns into happiness The Time where long anxious wait ends The Time where the heartbeat started would feel the world where first cries brings Joy The Time where words feel special when said by the heartbeat where exploring feels real where its beauty has no limit As bond grows It may face lots of love lots of light and lots of never-ending amazing memories As time passes the heartbeat feels Pain the pain of losing the beat that emerged from. the heartbeat feels Scared, that never-ending memories come to an end.

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Centered on personal experience of birth, love, loss; abstract only in framing device.

Moderate density; repeating structural phrases with varied emotional content per section.

Mixed: joy and beauty balanced against pain, loss, and fear of endings.

Quiet, meditative pace with sparse punctuation; contemplative rather than kinetic.

Approximately 45 lines; falls in 31-60 range.

Heartbeat as extended metaphor for connection/life; personification of emotions and time.

Pure lyric internal meditation on emotional states; no narrative or dramatic voice shift.

Between two heartbeats..

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