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Pride gets in the way

Envy lies in hearts 

Gluttony overflows our nation

While lust tears relations apart

Anger boils within our veins 

Greed prevents us from our potential

Sloth makes us question ourselves 

 

Had I the chance to change anything in the world I would make the world

Proud

Healthy

Faithful

Tranquil

Thankful

and Spiritual 

 

 

 

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