All my loving

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All my loving,

It’s easy to obtain.

Refrain,

Everyday is the same.

 

What do I have to offer when you’re gone?

I tried to tell you that I loved you all along,

But you’ve found happiness somewhere else.

And when I  notice that,

It feels a little like I’m on fire..

Like maybe in Hell?

 

I tried not to fall,

But I fell.

A little too hard.

On my knees I sit.

Waiting for you to come get me.

Waiting for you to permit.

 

I could tell you I love you a thousand times,

But what would it change?

I can promise I’m through with the games.

I won’t be fine..

 

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