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It always amazes me how women can fall for that little word I'm sorry.......Day and night they fill the pain of the hand ....Of the one that says I love and I'm your man....Why do they stay have they lost their strength or maybe their way.......Or perhaps neither new love at all and their dignity was to small......To put up with what ever each put out..... Thinking they could solve it all with a slap or a shout....It's not love when you have to communicate with... a shout ....a punch...a kick ....or pushing each other about...... Yes it always amazes me...... How a women can stay with a man that beats her and steals her dignity........Women sure you have pain and scars that won't heal.......But let me tell you the real deal........If a man ever puts his hands on you tell'em to pack his bags your through.....And if he tries to take away your self respect or dignity.......Tell him to hit the door that don't fly with me.......No more will you use your hand then say I'm sorry I love you or especial say I'm your man........So I say to all women near and far please realize how beautiful you are......And a real man will honor and cherish you not beat and treat you like a fool......So all my ladies remember love is something you never should fear ......And if you do it's not love make it disappear.......

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