Awaken

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I wake
But I do not feel awaken
Your love has gone
And it has depressed my soul
So when I wake and your not there
I am woke but not awaken
Once upon a time your presence
Your love
The sunlight in your eyes that shun upon
me making me swoon
was gone
You left and abanded your most precious treasure
I would have never left you or let the world kidnap you
But you let it
And I had no choice but to let you
go
So every now and then I’ll dream of you
And enjoy our time spent while my body lay stiff
Because when I dream I let you in
But when I wake I let you go again
So until I dream again
Until it becomes real
My soul lay like a sleeping beauty
Waiting patiently for your love to awaken me again

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