Beauty of a Love Lost

The gaze in which sparked a fire, two hearts ablaze in the name of love,the deafening silence as one begins to slow, the other quick with anxiety, machines shake nearing the final moments. Her tear drops to the linen,"Why must you go?" her worn eyes search for an answer.Their lips meet one final time,a shock through her body as his coldness spreads, enough air for a final breath, a slow exhale from his limp body ,"I will always love you" escaped his turning lips. A final gasp led to silence,broken only by the soft whisper of the nurse "He's gone." Her chest sunk,her heart a fragile piece, A life together ended in a simple stutter. 

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wow-felt the msg

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