Beneath The Snow

Let’s bury ourselves beneath the snow,

Hidden away where no one knows

Let’s freeze ourselves within the ice,

Frozen in time and paradise

 

Solemn secrets the snow can keep

Wary whispers through the water seep

The pebbles disguise the path we took

The branches hide our secret brook

 

Let’s lose ourselves among the trees,

Adrift in our prospective dreams

Let’s tangle ourselves in hungry thorns,

Caught up in promises newly sworn

 

Solemn secrets the snow can keep

Wary whispers through the water seep

The pebbles disguise the path we took

The branches hide our secret brook

Comments

Mafi Grey

This is really good too

TevaMayer

Thanks so much!

 

Hobbe

You know, I never really thought of winter as paradise, but I see it now. I enjoyed your poem.

TevaMayer

I'm glad my poem inspired a change in perspective! Thanks for you comment!

RebeccaYSPerez

I've previously read your poem Autumn's Child last year, and I absolutely loved it. Reading this one I adored the continued theme of seasons and nature, it is obviously something you find very beautiful and you are able to seamlessly express that from your mind to the page so well it makes the reader see it as well. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.

Rebecca

TevaMayer

Wow! Thank you so much for this comment! I'm glad you were able to uncover what inspires me and I'm so happy you enjoy my poems! Thanks again for the wonderful compliment! 

kyle.c.stevens

Never stop writing you have a real gift

TevaMayer

Thank you! And I never intend to stop :D

AdeolaBolu

You are indeed very talented, and you inspire me. Keep it up!

TevaMayer

Thanks so much for this comment! I'm honored to be a source of inspiration!

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