Blue

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Look! 

Look!

Up there in the sky!

A canvas of grey, some splashes of white.

Look!

See!

A sliver of blue,

That slips like a bullet straight toward me and you!

Oh!

Look!

There's more of them now!

The raindrops are aiming themselves at my brow!

Ha!

There!

The spots on the ground!

In rain--yes, rain--is happiness found.

Aww!

Look!

And here comes my puppy,

Whose eyes are spread wide like an innocent guppy.

Oh!

Look!

Her eyes are blue, too!

They are darting around to slurp up the view.

Here!

Look!

We're pouncing around,

As the raindrops are bouncing straight off of the ground.

Look!

Now!

As we dance around,

In rain--yes, rain--is happiness found.

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