Brick Wall

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Distance is like a brick wall.
The more clear it is the faster you hit it and fall.
The wall can be high or it can be short, but its purpose is to hold support.
Don’t let anything in and don’t let it out just keep it in place and let it work out.
Some want this wall between them and another,
While others wait for the thunder
to break
                it
                       down and end the t e n s i o n
But that wall was put up with such intention.
Those who care the most will do whatever it takes to knock it down.
At the end of the day you wait to hear the sound
of them pounding on you wall and begging you to surrender.
My wall was up, you knocked it down.
You pulled me out of the rubble and never let me drown.
This poem is to thank you, for giving your all
as you came in search of me to knock down my wall.

 

~A.R

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