Brooklynn.
Brooklynn.
12" Chili dogs and Thin crusted pizza.
Soft aqua and sage.
A delicate girl.
But is delicate Brooklynns goal?
Does Brooklynn want to be known by:
New York, Chili Dogs, Pizza, and Green?
I'm Brooklynn, and personally,
I prefer normal crusted pizza
12" plain hotdogs
Brown
and Pink.
I'm Brooklynn, and personally,
I've never been asked:
"Do you like being known by a city,
defined by a mood,
stared at by a classroom full of children whenever a movie takes place in new York,
and Big urban cities filled with big sparkly lights?"
Perhaps if I were to be asked those questions,
I would say:
"No thank you.
I want to be known by me.
By my personality,
by Brooklynn being my name,
by My favorite activities and sports.
By speech team.
By archery.
By volleyball."
Perhaps I'd say:
"Im Brooklynn,
and that's all I ever want to be known for."
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▾ This Poem's Voice
Your Poem's Voice
PersonalThemeAbstract
Deeply personal identity struggle; autobiographical and concrete throughout.
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple ideas layered: stereotypes, identity, preferences, assertion of self.
DarkSentimentBright
Frustrated/defensive tone shifts to empowered affirmation by end.
StillEnergyExplosive
Escalating intensity through repetition and rhetorical questions building to declaration.
MicroLengthEpic
Approximately 35 lines; falls in 31-60 range.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Minimal figurative language; mostly direct address and declarative statements.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric internal voice; speaker directly addressing self-definition and personal grievances.
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