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Checkmate


I live my life like a game of chess where all of the things I love are sacrificed like pawns. I move and shuffle pieces around my board and watch as they're taken from me. "Pawn to E5." Taken. "Pawn to D6" Taken. "Queen takes D6" A small retribution, but my game, my life still in ashes. "Check." "Check." "Check." I run frantically around the board, ignoring my problems and just trying to escape all of the sacrifices and trying to just hold on "Check." "Check." "Check." I am hopeless, a single soldier against an army, so I run, run, run. But someday, my problems will be faster than me. "Check." "Check." "Checkmate."
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“My breath is offensive to my wife, and I am loathsome to my own brothers” - Job 19:17 || Welcome to my page. I like to write about myself and the things I experience, sometimes metaphorically, sometimes not.

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal struggle using chess metaphor; concrete life experience.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple interconnected ideas: sacrifice, loss, escape, hopelessness, defeat.

DarkSentimentBright

Despair, helplessness, inevitable defeat dominate throughout.

StillEnergyExplosive

Frantic movement, repetition of 'Check,' running; escalating tension.

MicroLengthEpic

29 lines; falls in 16-30 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Extended chess metaphor; simile; personification of problems.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; introspective first-person throughout.

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