"Chilling" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 19/8/2005

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United Kingdom

Chill or KILL I've Had My Fill ...
of Those Who Want To Test My Will ... !!!

I Chill These Days Cos' People Prey ...
Like RAIN FILLED Clouds In Skies of Grey ...

Times Right Now Bring MUCH Dismay .....
Because of EVIL On DISPLAY ... !!!

That's Why I Chill With NO ... E Pills ... !!!

I'd Rather Sit And Watch ... " Kill Bill " ...
Chilling Is The Greatest Thing ... !!!!!
Just Like When Aretha SINGS ... !!!!!

While These FOOLS Want Rings That ... " BLING " ...
I Just Want ... " Simple Living " ... !!!

Something WITHOUT ... Undue Stress ... !!!!!
Like A PUSHY Manageress ...

HEAR ME Lord And PLEASE God Bless ... !!!

Help Me Chill And NOT OBSESS ... !!!
About My Life And Get ... "depressed" ... !!!

Like Those Who Have NOW REGRESSED ...
INTO Places ... of DISTRESS ... !!!

Cos' of TRYING To IMPRESS ... !?!
EVERY Fool They Run Into ... ?!?

Come On Now ...
That Just AIN'T Cool ... !!!

What You HAVE DOES NOT Make YOU ... ?!!!?
Trust Me Folks This IS The TRUTH ... !!!

When You Are RELAXED And CHILLED ...

Thinking of Your Shopping Bills ...
Does It Make You FEEL FULFILLED ... ?!?

That's Something To Cast Some Doubt ... ???
On What MATTERS Have NO Doubt ... !!!

Chilling CAN Do This For You ...
Make You THINK ... RELAX And Stew .........................
On The Things That You've Been Through ...

Things You've Done When Feeling Blue ...
Or The Things That Made You SMILE ... !!!

When You Wore The Latest Styles ... !!!
But When You Do And Then Think Back .....................................................................

Were There Things You NEVER Had ... ?
Like TRUE LOVE ... Or A HUG From Your Mum ... ?

Or THAT Someone Who You CRAVED To Be THE ONE ...
To Share Your Dreams And Your KINGDOM ... !!!

NOT Your Car ... !!!
OR Your ... " New Shoes " ... !!!

But THIS THING ...
This Thing Called ... YOU ... !!!

Need I Offer Any Clues ... ?!?
Chilling Is A WONDROUS Thing ... !!!
Better THAT Than Blood SPILLING ... !!!

I Recognise Then Sit and Write ...
If It's Good I Then RECITE ... !!!
Where There Is An OPEN Mic ...

Then Like James ...
I'm ................................................................................. OUT OF Sight ........... !!!!!

COVERED By The Shroud of Night ...

Whilst I Search To Find The LIGHT .............................

This Is Where I Then FULFIL ...
By Usage of ... PC or Quill ...

To Spread THE WORD ...
oF YES ... " BIG VIRGE " ... !!!!

Ahhhhh That's ME ...
A Man Who Writes Some Poetry ...
Based On Things That I Have Seen ...

In My Home And On The Streets ...
This Thing We Call ... REALITY ...

This Is NO Documentary ... !!!

Or A Soap On Your TV ...

Maybe A Book ... ???

Let's Wait And See ...........................................

If I'm Deemed To Be WORTHY ....

To Be Published For My Transcripts ...

THAT Day Will Be TRULY FULFILLING ... !!!!!
But Whilst I Wait I'll Keep On .........

........ " Chilling " .........

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