The Cliff on the Ocean

Fear,
My biggest challenger,
my greatest weakness.
For many years,
I've been its captive,
I've been its slave.
Yet, now,
after everything,
it's losing the battle,
losing its hold.
Because I have jumped
off the cliff
into the deep,
swirling,
confusing ocean below.

It took me an eternity to figure out how,
to figure out a way to be free.
Until I realized the chains that held me
were in my own hands,
were my own knots.
All I had to do was untie them,
undo what I had done to myself.

So, I looked in the mirror,
looked into myself.
Stared the maniac in the eyes
and told it what I wanted,
to be free,
more than anything,
to be free.

It started to release me,
after I started to reprimand it.
But I had to take the leap
off the cliff
into the deep,
swirling,
confusing ocean below.

It took me an eternity to reach the water,
but now I realize,
I have never wanted anything so much
as the soft,
flowing,
roaring wind that embraced me as I made my descent.
For it told me everything I needed to know.

It told me that nothing had me in chains,
not even
my greatest weakness,
my biggest challenger,
Fear.
 

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