Cocktail of a kaleidoscope
S.zaynab.k (ALLITERATION)
Cows milked: mitigated mooing in the meadows then
Weaving on the warp, some workaholic women
Harvest of hapless halibuts on hooks
Bookish book-worms buried in books
A palomino and a pony patter on the paving
Hucksters and hawkers hawking every housing.
Ravers out on the razzle raising a raucous razz-ma-tazz
Beavers busy building beaver-dams but about it quite blasé.
Doves cooing in divine chorus
Frogs frisking out of focus
Horoscopes are hocus pocus.
Tidal waves of tsunami treacherously tread
Sea-anemones scattered upon the sea-bed.
Geraniums genuflecting in jungle-like gardens
Hunters wary of wandering wild-life wardens.
All this may be viewed if one ventures about videotaping
Nature's much nicer even with less of landscaping
These are direly different scenes from different parts of the globe
Perhaps like a space probe's kaleidoscopic poetic probe
Comments
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Gursimar
Sweet use of simile. It went well on my tongue.
I am but a stranger to poetry though. I just breathe out every emotion on my mind to calm down (this time being first usually I sing my own songs). A bit of outcast too. But i don't feel alone unless i'm with someone.
If you want to be friends with me, do tell me about you too. For I've had lots of friends that went in and got out of my life. Of whom I forgot.
S.zaynab.k
Thanks for fine comment. I want to be friends with everyone. I Esp like comment exchange wirh fellow poets.
Jan Wienen
Freedom of thought
Jan Wienen
There is always the freedom of thought
Vespertinal
Nicely done, I appreciate the alliterative nature of the poem along with the rhyming scheme used.
dowxbeg
I didn't know what to expect after seeing the title, and I really liked this! Your use of alliteration
is really impressive, and I particularly loved it when you gave the geraniums human actions. Great poem!
Chisanga franklin
Beautiful peice so poetic
I love it
hawk45
Lines 14 and 15 are really catchy!
Genuflecting!
Wandering wildlife wardens!
Great poem overall keep up the good work!