Cold

It’s so cold.

I can’t feel my hands.

All I see is red.

It’s so cold.

 

Where am I?

I cannot see.

My body is still.

Where am I?

 

Who is there?

I hear footsteps.

I hear whispers.

Who is there?

 

I feel so tired.

I can’t get up.

It hurts to try.

I feel so tired.

 

I want to rest.

I want to dream.

I want to see my family and friends.

I want to rest… forever. 

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