Countdowns

Ten
I tell you of your sin
Nine
The anguish of your Eyes
Eight
Its the thing God hates
Seven
That No good girls go to Heaven
Six
Because no good girls exist.
Five
You fight to stay alive
Four
Can't hold on anymore
Three
But just as someone died for me
Two
So He died for you
One
Just one way-The Son.

Ten
Christ died just once for sin
Nine
It was for all mankind He died
Eight
What kept Him there? Not hate.
Seven
In Him we can go to heaven
Six
Heaven does exist
Five
In Him is eternal life.
Four
Christ opened up the Door
Three
Paved the way for you and me
Two
Just once He died for you
One
Lo! The Power of the Son!

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