Darkness around the world

The trees leaves breezz , the sun shine , the birds sing,  kids are playing, and little boys chasing little girls. Seem like everything in the world is working good but one problem. Theres this one girl who walks around with a heavy pain on her back. She never smiles and talk less. She feel as if the world ended for her. In her head the tress branch are broken, a stromy weather, silent, kids lock up in there room, and boys well doing the crazy things. one find a prince fall in love and then back down in the pit where she started, find another but still the moon can never compare to the sun. The stars will never shine as bright and the world will be just as it started off DARK. she think why do boys play basketballs so much in fact there favorite part is when they shot they willing to see if they will make a shoot.

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